fairborn10's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Godzilla's Raid]

hmm, yeesh

At least I see, you have improved your drawings.
For the effort graphics 10.

Not too funny tho, getting bored of your penguin jokes already.

Raicc responds:

You can never get bored of penguins man..

["Bob"]

Really something for your fist submission

This was different...
Kinda strange, but not spooky like David's.
You should really improve your drawings and learn to animate better.
Your pre-loader bar aint showing up cpz it is white, the background is also white. So you have 2 options. Paint the background darker or repaint the loader bar.

Oh yeah, and try to paint the image first. Than go backwards with an appearing thing (eraise it FBF) than reverse the frames and you will have a veery nice animation.

mattandsam responds:

cheers

[Blockhead: Episode 5]

Another brilliant Blockhead episode!

I love the sound, it is so clean.
You still havn't added a load bar, I can see you really are lazy.

Keep 'em comin!

The-Swain responds:

Haha, I stayed up until 1 PM, just now, finishing this thing for you guys. I'm half insane right now. But I'm glad I could deliver for you yet again :D

One of these days I *will* update all my existing flash titles with loader bars. Until then, the peeking-Blockhead loader will have to suffice.

[The Green Blur]

I dunno nothing about clayanimations.

But what I can help you with is the preloader.
The preloader bar isn't showing, coz I is white. The background is white also. White colour doesn't show on white, does it? So paint the background darker, or choose another colour for the load bar for it to show up. (you can adjust the colour of the load bar by double-clicking the NG preloader, than unlocking the loadbar layer and paint it!)

whiskas1 responds:

thanks, ya ive been having ALOT of trouble with the preloader, thanks for the advice

[TX2s Halloween Collection]

Great

This flash was cool and funny.
The loading screen kicked ass! Did you make it urself?

TX2 responds:

Yep. I was a little Uneasy about it too, because it's very hard to test a loading screen. and if you put in a defective loading screen, there is hell to pay (see the first reviews to space boy plays lazer tag for an example).

[Blockhead: Episode 4]

Nice!

You really need a PRELOADER BAR.

The-Swain responds:

I am spoiled rotten on high speed internet. For me, Blockhead only popped up three times before the play button appeared.

Anyway, my programming is under par - to figure out how to make a progress bar, I'd have to take time away from animating. I'll see what I can whip together for Ep.5, but I'm always worried that new code won't work.

[my short halloween]

GREAT!

Just great!
This was very interesting. The strange noises and music made it sound not funny, but like black humor. This was impressiv, how you thought of such storyline. For instance the 'Take off my body' was very funny.

I would like to see from you soon, keep up the good flash.

GCool responds:

wow thanks!
well there is gonna be a sequal (as mentioned in the movie), so you can look forawrds to that for some time before christmass, i may do another lil animation some time soon, but i wont start it straight away, since its my birthday soon :D

i still dont get the low scores on the interactivity, thats why i put the game in! im sure i coulda got a 10 if youd realised :D

XD now i want to get this into the halloween colection.

thanks for the awsome score! best so far :D

[Demon Scarecrow]

That just wasn't great

not too bad either, if it would of been under judgement, I would of blammed it. (no sõbra mõttes siis 5e andnud) But the graphics were just crap! You havn't learned to draw better in 2 years! Learning filtyers, eh? Lol. Fifen this peec of shit!

Raicc responds:

You make as much sense as a grandma on a hotdog..

[Felix preview]

Nice

I really mean it, nice!
I'd really like to see the full movie.
Keep doing flash!

madmilo responds:

thank you :D its always nice to hear good reviews.

[Under Sea Friends Ep.2]

Not bad at all!

That is a well animated cartoon you hav there. The sound was ok. Good choice on the song. Kinda linked with the underwater theamtics.

I woul like to see more from you. Good luck with your next flashes!

TheMythicBrother responds:

Sorry for the late reply but anyway thanks a lot fo shizzle you should really check out under the sea friends ep.2 out now :)